Two app-style cards: 中文 on top, Tagalog below. The swap button spins and the Tagalog text types in. The Copy → Translate → Paste → Send pills light up in a loop. The counter goes ×3 … ×12. Last, a “Maria is waiting…” chip pops in.
VO “Still translating for your helper? Copy, translate, paste… every single message?”
The same phone as the rest of the video. Mei sends a 中文 bubble, then a pasted Tagalog copy appears (dashed, “pasted from translator”). Maria replies in Tagalog, and a new “??? …translating” bubble appears. The amber tag “Every message. Twice.” slaps on.
VO “Still translating for your helper? Every message… twice?”
Type only. The teal pill word rolls fast through 翻譯中… → nagsasalin… → menerjemahkan… → translating, as a slot machine, and lands on English. The 4 language pills drift around it. This matches the close, which rolls “their own language” the same way.
VO “Still translating for your helper?”
A Gemini illustration of Mei in the same style as the avatars, in a rounded card. Half-translated speech bubbles (中文, Tagalog?, Bahasa?) pop around her and wobble. The Copy → Translate → Paste pills loop under the card.
VO “Still translating for your helper? Copy, translate, paste…”
The first version. Its style is different from the app, so the 4 options above replace it.
Gemini photo of a tired mom, slow push-in. Big headline word by word. The pills light up in a loop: Copy → Translate → Paste → Send. Counter ×3 … ×7 … ×12.
VO “Still translating for your helper? Copy, translate, paste… every single message?”
The photo blurs to cream. The phone rises. The progress ring fills to 3/5.
VO “With HelperFlow, everyone writes in their own language.”
The bubble types in and sends. Maria's earlier message already shows in 中文 for Mei. The language track at the top marks 中文.
VO “Mei writes in Chinese.”
The chip flips to Maria. The same bubble changes letter by letter into Tagalog. The track moves to Tagalog.
VO “Maria reads it in Tagalog.”
The chip flips to Mike. Both messages are in English, with “Translated from …” tags.
VO “Mike sees English.”
The phone rail glides left. The event card drops in. The word list starts: Tasks.
VO “Tasks, meals,”
The dish cards slide in one by one. The list moves to Meals.
VO “…house rules,”
The rules appear with a “✓ 已接受” stamp. The list moves to Rules.
VO “…shopping lists —”
The items check off one by one. The list moves to Shopping.
VO “…all in each person's language.”
The phone zooms out to 4 lock screens. The same reminder lands on all four at once, with 4 soft pings.
VO “Even the notifications.”
“their own language” rolls through 用自己的語言 → sa sarili nilang wika → dalam bahasanya → English. The avatars pop in.
VO “Everyone sees the same home — in their own language.”
The line moves up. The amber pill pops in. Then the logo, helperflow.app and the store badges. Hold 0.6s.
VO “Helper and family join free.”
Generated images (Gemini 3 Pro Image)
Hook D illustration
v1 hook photo
Mike · English
Mei · 中文
Grandma · 中文
Maria · Tagalog
Siti · BahasaVoiceover (sound version, ElevenLabs, ~52 words)
“Still translating for your helper? Copy, translate, paste… every single message? With HelperFlow, everyone writes in their own language. Mei writes in Chinese. Maria reads it in Tagalog. Mike sees English. Tasks, meals, house rules, shopping lists — all in each person's language. Even the notifications. Everyone sees the same home — in their own language. Helper and family join free.”Music and SFX
Light warm bed (soft plucks / marimba), low under the voice. SFX: key taps, a send whoosh, a soft chime on each chip flip, ticks, 4 pings on the notifications, a pop on the CTA pill.Open questions
- Hook: A, B, C or D? (my pick: B)
- Voice: one warm female English voice. OK?
- Music: a new ElevenLabs track, or reuse the launch-ad music?
- Store badges on the last frame: keep or remove? Do you also want a 4:5 cut?
- Please check the Tagalog and Bahasa content lines (chat, calendar, shopping, notifications). The app UI labels come from
translations.csv.